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a shadow without a name
a touch that feels no rain
a memory that has nothing to gain
a soul searching for the meaning to pain

a bird drops from the air
as she is caught within your stare
forgetting the reason why she should care
she's lost focus, waiting for a dare

he is a light at the end of the tunnel
sounds of sorrow and chaos in the rubble
a midnight scar lights in between
all that there is, and is unseen

in a world free of pain
is there only pleasure to gain
or are we all covered in the same old stain
will we sit and scatter as we wait for the rain?

time will tell

~End~
every drop
a memory is added
every tear
a love is born


~~~

.rain.

~Written by: Joshua Ward
Date: July 8, 2010
Time: 10:50 PM

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blacink Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
lovelovelove. I've read so many peoms describing rain, but they all start and end the same, with words everyone uses. You aren't that way though, and you're words carry onto each other perfectly :] Great job.
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
thank you so very much :)
i'm so glad you love this one :)
it makes me happy :) Thanks again! :) :hug:

~Josh~
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blacink Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
np you have quite the style :]
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
thanks again~ :]

~Josh~
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treehugger1995 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2010
Good job doesn't even cover it
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
thank you so very much :)
i'm so happy you like this one. :)

~Josh~
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treehugger1995 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
It's amazing (^_^) I'm definitely checking out the rest of your stuff later! You are talented! keep up the good work mister!
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
Thanks very much :) I will :)

~Josh~
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treehugger1995 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
GOOD GOOD! haha
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
Thanks. :)

~Josh~
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